Suddenly I realized I could pick up an important reading/writing/reflecting thread: parallel construction.
This past week we were bringing an essay through its final drafts in one of my classes. For the editing class, I’d scanned the revised drafts for error patterns to teach a mini-lesson on. I noticed a majority of students had made errors in parallel construction. So I pulled some examples from their work and taught the lesson.
- What is something you worked hard to improve or do well in this piece of writing?
- What is something you want to work to improve in your next piece of writing?
- What's something you learned about the topic, the world, or yourself while working on this piece?
- What is something you learned about writing while working on this piece?
Today as I was creating next week’s online assignment, I thought, “I should include a mentor sentence component.” Then I thought, “I should pick up on the interest in practicing parallel construction.” But would I be able to find parallel construction in the chosen article that would be simple enough for these advanced high school EFL students to be able to understand and to benefit from patterning? Yes!!! Here are the 2 mentor sentences I found:
- “We nurse one another, romance one another, weep for one another.” (paragraph 2)
- “The same is true for people who steal or despots who slaughter.” (paragraph 6)
- For sentence 1: Write a sentence modeled on this one. Write about some group of people you are a part of--basketball teammates, KIUA students, Japanese people, Christians, teenagers, or some other group of your choice. Use this pattern: We _____ one another, _____ one another, _____ one another.
- For sentence 2: Write a sentence modeled on this one. For example:
- We’re having days that are warm and nights that are cool.
- I enjoy being with Japanese who are reserved and polite and Americans who are outgoing and warm.
- I prefer dogs that are friendly to cats that are aloof.